Wednesday, April 13, 2016

Through the Portal


 













for dVerse

like a bright fantasy
shimmering
hazy veil of mirrored pool
distorts reality
entering
dreams of radiant fairy rule

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7 comments:

  1. GraceApril 13, 2016 at 5:59 PM

    That mirror can distort reality if we are not careful ~ Like that hazy veil of bright fantasy ~

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  2. lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comApril 13, 2016 at 6:04 PM

    Love the phrase "shimmering hazy veil of mirrored pool." Sometimes that distorted reality is temptingly beautiful. Very nice take on the prompt! :)

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  3. Gayle Walters RoseApril 13, 2016 at 7:17 PM

    I love the idea of entering a portal to a another land where fairies rule. A wonderful fantastical poem! :)

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  4. Victoria Ceretto-SlottoApril 13, 2016 at 8:46 PM

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  5. VictoriaApril 13, 2016 at 8:47 PM

    I suppose we all have those dreams, even in our most mundane world. Lovely poem.

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  6. brudbergApril 13, 2016 at 9:25 PM

    Somehow this both tantalize and chills me..

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  7. HannahApril 14, 2016 at 10:09 AM

    Love that shimmery veil of magic pool...well done!

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