Thursday, August 16, 2012

Huitain Cat

for dVerse

He’s a sly fellow with whimsies
to engage a leaf in combat
or catch my hand in a tease
or declare war upon the rats
to show his skill to me. The cat
only asks for this show my lap
to curl himself in warm and fat
purring. Letting me enjoy his nap.

8 comments:

  1. smiles....sounds like my cat...fun huitain...fun to watch them play isnt it...nice rhymes too, flows so well i barely noticed the form...

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  2. Another GRREEAATT! cat huitain. I loved it..This was fanciful and well executed. I know the life of a cat and always have a lap ready! Lovely.

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  3. Love the idea of a cat engaging a leaf in combat! It does seem like that when my cat launches into this activity! Like a mock battle!

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  4. We both wrote about cats...mine a much more wild and elusive one than our house cats...of which I have one too. Or should I say...she has me! I love this sweet description...mine loves my lap too...

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