Monday, February 27, 2017

Ethereal


In the fairy wood
Green foliage flows like water
Without a wind
Rich blossoms bloom
On oaks that ne’er flower
Sweetening winter’s chill with spring
Gold pieces fall instead of leaves
Vanishing at a single touch
Leaving only the giggles
Of sprites and pixies



Written for dVerse


 
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12 comments:

  1. De JacksonFebruary 27, 2017 at 8:49 PM

    Ohhhh...I can hear them! I love this!

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  2. brudbergFebruary 27, 2017 at 9:42 PM

    Magic in the woods.

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  3. Frank HubenyFebruary 27, 2017 at 11:12 PM

    I liked these lines: "Gold pieces fall instead of leaves
    Vanishing at a single touch" Pick up that gold and it vanishes.

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  4. hyperCRYPTICalFebruary 28, 2017 at 6:30 AM

    I can cope with just the giggles of sprites and pixies, but would still welcome the magic!
    Kind regards
    Anna :o]

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  5. indybevFebruary 28, 2017 at 7:08 AM

    What a lovely fantasy....giggling sprites and pixies! I love it.

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  6. Kim M. RussellFebruary 28, 2017 at 7:17 AM

    Ooh, fairy giggles!

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  7. Jane DoughertyFebruary 28, 2017 at 1:39 PM

    Magical :)

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  8. AnonymousFebruary 28, 2017 at 3:45 PM

    Took giggles to a magic realm

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  9. CedarwindMarch 1, 2017 at 7:13 AM

    I like 'green foliage flows like water'...a magical scene :)

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  10. Paul John DearMarch 2, 2017 at 8:48 AM

    Delightful.

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  11. Sanaa RizviMarch 2, 2017 at 9:14 AM

    Enchanting!!❤️

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  12. GraceMarch 4, 2017 at 8:42 AM

    Love that ending <3

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