Revising Dreams

for dVerse

Revised

mellifluous dreams

breath nutmeg

and chirp after me

I will seek for them

heart first

for each honeyed crumb

would you blacken them?

heckle, fleer

caw unasked advice?

it does not matter

for soapsuds

sting but a moment

then breath forth new life

fresh, with the

scent of ironed heat

definitions

mellifluous - sweet, especially referring to a voice

fleer - essentially means sneer, but sounds cooler

Original

I’m a dreamer

Can’t you see?

With golden dreams

Trailing after me.

I’m going to find them

No matter who tries to stomp them

Smear my dreams with dirt

I’ll clean them up

Wash them, dry them, iron them

And make them come to life