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Geyser erupts throwing white on the sky
As if the water turned cloud against the blue
Hangs for a moment and then with a sigh
Falls back to the sapphire from whence it flew
Where indigo ripples bubble anew
Until the last ring fades and all is still
Leaving the heated turbulence tranquil
Oh! So lovely. I love your use of rhyme here. And all those gorgeous blues!
ReplyDeleteLots of blues here, happy ones, very nice.
ReplyDeleteI love the movements from falling, bubbling, fading and finally tranquility!
ReplyDeleteReally good rhyming and poetic form!
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ReplyDeleteBlues in motion, you've expressed it so well. The rhyme seals this!
ReplyDeleteHaving seen the bubbling and then the shooting up of geysers, I love this! You've described it perfectly -- and in blue! :)
ReplyDeleteLovely description! I have not yet had the chance to see a real geyser. One day!
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