You know, when I see those first large spots hitting the sidewalk, I know it's going to come down in buckets, and I wonder if i'll make it inside in time. Thanks, that touches home with me
Ah.. water is liFE Rain is blood Veins are rivers that FloW a Ocean uS.. ain't afraid oF Rain.. but oh ought the dry as D to F.. A the Rain.. as Blood to BRain..:)
I deleted my first comment because I had the wrong words -- sight. Flying fingers too fast on the keys. So - try again! drip drip then suddenly DOWN like sopping buckets! I love the line down like sopping buckets -- and I added DOWN like dropping buckets in my first reply -- buckets and buckets -- a real deluge. :) Really like this write!
You know, when I see those first large spots hitting the sidewalk, I know it's going to come down in buckets, and I wonder if i'll make it inside in time. Thanks, that touches home with me
ReplyDeleteLove the repetitive "D" like steady drip. Effect poem execution!
ReplyDeletewow...from dripping to deluge!!...so well done...
ReplyDeleteAh.. water is liFE
ReplyDeleteRain is blood
Veins
are rivers
that FloW
a Ocean uS..
ain't afraid oF Rain..
but oh ought the
dry
as D
to F..
A the
Rain..
as Blood to BRain..:)
I love the Ds dripping down the poem!
ReplyDeleteLove all the D's and specially that last line, like ocean waves. I will run for cover, smiles!
ReplyDeletedrip drip splash! Really enjoyed this alliterative poem and how it brought about the real rain.
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ReplyDeleteI deleted my first comment because I had the wrong words -- sight. Flying fingers too fast on the keys. So - try again!
ReplyDeletedrip drip then suddenly DOWN like sopping buckets!
I love the line down like sopping buckets -- and I added DOWN like dropping buckets in my first reply -- buckets and buckets -- a real deluge. :) Really like this write!
D is definitely for Drenching, from big drops to overwhelming waves!
ReplyDeleteI loved the repetition of the 'd' building up to the deluge.
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