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O!
Ah!
the
harp
sings
softly.
Harmony,
melodies.
Happiness
whispering
contentment.
Delightful
glissando.
Ethereal
plucked
musical
notes.
Harp
kin.
Ah!
O!
This is a snowball poem. Each line is one word that is one letter longer than the last one.
well penned :)
ReplyDeleteAnd to me it could also be a conceit with a hidden music in that plucking of the strings.
ReplyDeleteWell done.
ReplyDeleteNice..also it is shaped like a crescendo as is a harp...
ReplyDeleteThat must be really hard to do - congratulations! It also looks like fun!
ReplyDeleteYes, a terrific snowball. You've found a subject that works so well and have also made a concrete poem. I agree with Bjorn it also works as a conceit. Very nicely done!
ReplyDeleteExcellent job! You have inspired me to try this. This flows so easily and I like the beginning and ending the same, so to speak. The shape is pleasing and the poem itself is a happy trill, just like on a harp.
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ReplyDeleteI admire the technique, very nice flow ~
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Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteLovely! You have created music with this poem (and a poem with music)...and I love how you started with a one letter word!
ReplyDeleteWell done. It looks beautiful too.
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