Thursday, February 26, 2015

The Joust

for dVerse

Listening to the music. Voices on the street;
to eager sounds floating open through bright air.
The sounds soar up into my morning dreams;
music floating up forever: laughs. Window welcomes all.
Voices open into laughs, inviting. Little wrens fly
on through my window. Little chirps that hope.
The bright morning, welcomes wrens that sing with 
street air. Dreams all fly; hope with life.



14 comments:

  1. oh nice... i love all the sounds of the awakening day and the scent of last night's dreams - and the new ones to come... your poem made me also yearn for spring...

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  2. this reads like a breath of fresh air... love the hope and joy sprinkled throughout the write.

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  3. did like the freshness of this... light and up-lifting

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  4. A pleasing message...yes, dreams all fly. Which line? Whose poem? Brian's or Claudia's?

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    1. The first line is from Claudia's poem.

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    2. Thank you. And, hey, I didn't see a comment on my poem....

      http://inthecornerofmyeye.blogspot.com/2015/02/money-money-money.html

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  5. This sounds like a summer morning, the kind we long for just now,

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  6. "Little chirps that hope".... so nice that

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  7. Nothing like birds singing in the morning...lovely!

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  8. Love the last lie especially.

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  9. A,lovely evocation of morning and waking.

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  10. City scape, little birds on the sill - you made magic in your lines notwithstanding the take off from Claudia's poem, this song is all yours - full of the joy of morning, and the sound of your voice.

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  11. You paint a pretty picture with your words.

    Thanks for coming by to visit.

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  12. A lovely composition, I feel it all gently, yet with this hidden intensity.

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