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Listening to the music. Voices on the
street;
to eager sounds floating open through
bright air.
The sounds soar up into my morning
dreams;
music floating up forever: laughs. Window
welcomes all.
Voices open into laughs, inviting. Little
wrens fly
on through my window. Little chirps that
hope.
The bright morning, welcomes wrens that
sing with
street air. Dreams all fly; hope with
life.
oh nice... i love all the sounds of the awakening day and the scent of last night's dreams - and the new ones to come... your poem made me also yearn for spring...
ReplyDeletethis reads like a breath of fresh air... love the hope and joy sprinkled throughout the write.
ReplyDeletedid like the freshness of this... light and up-lifting
ReplyDeleteA pleasing message...yes, dreams all fly. Which line? Whose poem? Brian's or Claudia's?
ReplyDeleteThe first line is from Claudia's poem.
DeleteThank you. And, hey, I didn't see a comment on my poem....
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This sounds like a summer morning, the kind we long for just now,
ReplyDelete"Little chirps that hope".... so nice that
ReplyDeleteNothing like birds singing in the morning...lovely!
ReplyDeleteLove the last lie especially.
ReplyDeleteA,lovely evocation of morning and waking.
ReplyDeleteCity scape, little birds on the sill - you made magic in your lines notwithstanding the take off from Claudia's poem, this song is all yours - full of the joy of morning, and the sound of your voice.
ReplyDeleteYou paint a pretty picture with your words.
ReplyDeleteThanks for coming by to visit.
A lovely composition, I feel it all gently, yet with this hidden intensity.
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