Wednesday, February 25, 2015

The Archer

for dVerse

Trumpets sound in the morning air
The field is laid so deadly green
Noble knights roaming everywhere
But I only watch the archers

Will he come? Again the trumpets blare
My small favor for the winner
And a gold arrow if he dare
So I only watch the archers

The sun climbs high above my chair
On the green brave knights fight and bleed
The rowdy crowd cheers their warfare
Yet I only watch the archers

At last! See how the archers fare
They shoot arrow after arrow
But no sign of bold Robin there
And I only watch the archers

The crowd shouts, the winner declare
He smiles to receive his prize
They catch Robin Hood in their snare
Yet I only watch the archer

My heart is drowning in despair
But his men spring from every side
Fighting till they flee elsewhere 
Still I only watch the archer



12 comments:

  1. Yes.. the archer.. the back bone of the medieval battle.. the grunt of the trenches that is the core of war.. to get the job done.. and well a mention as tole.. in poetry lore..:)

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  2. nice...the archer can be pretty entrancing...especially if they know what they are doing...because it takes a certain amount of skill to get that arrow to go where you want...but even still, the hear to frobin hood is rather entrancing as well...

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  3. Oh I enjoyed this very much - loved the repeated refrain

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  4. Ah, there really is something so graceful about the archers, I think. No wonder she only focused on them....

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  5. love the classic tale, Robin Hood.

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  6. I like how you used an old tale but tackled it from the angle of someone who loves 'the archer'.

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  7. Oh fair Marian.. what a great angle.. and maybe if she waits the archer will come for her.

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  8. lovely tale... I love to watch archery competitions on espn so I'm all in on this write...

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  9. Oh, this was rather fun to read..the archer has caught the lady's eye.

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  10. The form is well suited for this poem..or vice versa....there's something reverent about archery and I think you captured that substance.

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