Tuesday, August 12, 2014

Delayed



When the typhoon raged
And sent sheets of rain and wind
Howling and crashing through the streets
The hotel was quiet inside
Expect for the ringing of the phone
“The flight’s canceled,”
Quenching the flame of excitement
We had dreamed of for over a year
Home was only an ocean away

Five days of waiting
Not sadly – this place was our home too –
But there were ashes on the flame
We seemed to forget
That ocean was crossable
Until the fourth day we remembered
That home was a possibility
And ghost flames of excitement rose


Yet when the airplane took flight
It still seemed a dream
Until I heard my own language
And your voice on the phone
Then saw you waiting for me
When I came home



7 comments:

  1. oh. what a hard delay...to be so looking forward to going home...and having the storm...but when you do land...it is so nice to feel so at home...

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  2. When ocean separates and that flight is delayed.. what can you do but wait?... but at the end the meeting is so much sweeter.. I can really feel how this felt unreal, until reality came back once you were boarded.. as much an inner journey as a real one.. combining in the end of coming home.

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  3. multiple homes here... loved the second stanza... nicely done

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  4. it's such a great feeling to have someone waiting for you at home... loved the temporary homes you had to create in those moments of delays

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  5. I liked the waiting and the reward.

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  6. Like the journey from the unavoidable delay of a long-anticipated trip home to the disappointment, but acceptance that your current location is now home, to the joy of finally reaching your the home of your roots. Well done.

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