Tuesday, February 4, 2025

Cleaning my Room

Photo by Hans Eiskonen on Unsplash









When my fairy godmother gave me this room
It was green and fresh; ready to bloom
Light filtered in one sunbeam at time
Filling the space with possibilities sublime
Here a chair and there a shelf of books
And a wave of a wand would make a cheerful nook
A place to take a seat and rest and sing
To take shelter from every trying thing

Alas, what great curse has come upon me?
What witch cackles at my sufferings with glee?
Where once I sat sheltered from life’s storm,
The light is darkening fast and goblins swarm
The room is weed-choked and far too stale
And I, only a princess, am far too frail
To lift up a hand and lift this vile curse
Is there no rescue from this wretched verse?

And yet - if I move this chair, throw out this box
Scare off the goblins and banish the rotting socks
Perhaps I can at least begin to reclaim my own;
Yank out the weeds and dust around my throne
Find the edges of the room and let the light back in
When the room is clear once more; at last begin
To wave a magic magic wand at possibility
And recreate a majestic haven of tranquility

 

Written for dVerse.

 

 

8 comments:

  1. Love this especially; "And a wave of a wand would make a cheerful nook/A place to take a seat and rest and sing/To take shelter from every trying thing."🩷🩷

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  2. Your own room.. nothing is better, but sometimes you have to reclaim it.

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  3. I really enjoyed the fairy tale opening, the positioning of the helpless princess in the Cinderella-like reversal, but especially the way the narrative flips to giver her agency in her own life, to "Yank out the weeds and dust around my throne/Find the edges of the room and let the light back in." I love the jaunty meter and rhyme scheme employed, making reading it so pleasurable. The transformation into maturity in the last stanza though was wonderful, shedding the skin, as it were, of fairy-tale-dom. Wonderful, S.G.

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  4. Bravo! Stellar writing and very enjoyable to read.

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  5. Find the edges of the room and let the light back in....real philosophy in this exemplary verse...

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  6. I absolutely loved this! Great poem!

    Yvette M Calleiro :-)
    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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  7. Gardenia, there is a lovely lyrical quality to your poem. I actually sang it instead of read it.

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  8. I love the fairy tale quality of this poem.

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