Wild witches flit out this night
Whisking through moonlit willows
All ephemeral winter white
They fly by winding wind
Dispersing twinkling wishes wide
Winking silver in the night
Whizzing in through welcome windows
Resting on the wistful hearts within
Where wishes glow and grow
Written for dVerse.
I like all the alliteration with Ws.
ReplyDeleteThis is so lovely, and whimsical.
ReplyDeleteSo much gorgeous alliteration and assonance happening here! I can see those "moonlit willows..."
ReplyDeletea really gorgeous poem of witches in flight against a stunning winter backdrop.
ReplyDeleteWonderful and whimsical.
ReplyDeleteI like all those "w" sounds.
ReplyDeleteLoving the w sounds and word play e.g. They fly by winding wind.
ReplyDeleteHi SG! I enjoyed reading your poem here, it was well written... some nice alliteration... :-)
ReplyDelete...rob from Image & Verse
My “wink”
I like how this rolls off the tongue. Nicely done.
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