Snowflakes from the sky are hurling
In pale billows flurrying
Fluffy and puffy they’re swirling
Catching in eyelashes upward turning
Delight and laughter earning
Around and around the children are twirling
While the whiteness continues whirling
Written for dVerse.
I love all the rhymes in this! Such an action filled poem, reminding one deeply of a snow storm. Holiday and new years blessings
ReplyDeleteYes, you bring this alive...
ReplyDeleteGlorious work on rhymes in this poem!!❤️
ReplyDeleteNice sound in the poem for what is likely a silent snowfall.
ReplyDeleteSuch a wonderful image of all that whiteness... love it.
ReplyDeleteI love the imagery swirling and twirling ~ Happy Holidays to you and yours!
ReplyDeletedelightful!
ReplyDeleteYour words remind me of windswept snowflakes. Well done.
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