for dVerse
Drifting
fanfare on the lake
gold trumpets
sounding in the air
clouds in still water
lazy days
with tranquility
shimmering feathers
bright ballet
between shadow and sun
a lamentation
new moon weeps
sable tears all night
eyrar reflected
in deep pool
as clouds in the sky
the white sails flying
regatta
racing down the stream
poised with graceful ease
floating pearl
majestic royal
Of
swans
Asylum
water dance under
gibbous moon
shedding light on waves
Drift, fanfare, tranquility, ballet, lamentation, eyrar, regatta,
and royal are all names applied to a group of swans. For more swan groupings (more than 20!)
see here.
This form of poetry is called a lune. So of course I had to write one about a loon. Asylum and a water dance are names for a group of loons. For more see here.
This form of poetry is called a lune. So of course I had to write one about a loon. Asylum and a water dance are names for a group of loons. For more see here.
I admire their graceful dancing ~ And your Asylum piece is also stellar ~
ReplyDeleteI commend you for the lune poetry form ~ It's challenge to choose the words for each line ~
I love your description-packed showcase of all things swan and especially how you liken them to sailboats. Beautifully done. Also, your lune poetry is just lovely.
ReplyDeleteGayle ~
These are beautiful. I very much like this section:
ReplyDelete"bright ballet
between shadow and sun
a lamentation
new moon weeps"
A poem as graceful as swans! Great visualizations here.
ReplyDeleteThere is such tranquility in this!
ReplyDeletefloating pearl
ReplyDeletemajestic royal
Of swans...
Sigh.. this is soo beautiful!!
Lovely use of interesting words!
ReplyDeleteSwans are so rarely seen except in pairs.. Love all the words you have found.
ReplyDeleteLove! A lune about a loon, perfection.
ReplyDeleteAnd all those gorgeous swan words! It makes me so happy that you found such a lush pond of words to draw from. A beautiful piece.
I really loved that fourth stanza.
ReplyDeleteSMiLes.. i'LL
ReplyDeletego iN anotHeR
direction
and say..
cuckoo
undeRstAnds
A nEst..;)