Friday, November 9, 2012

Winter Fire

for dVerse

Winter falls white
shinning bright in
moonlight. On fair
pond; glassware smooth
child stares sleepy.
And happy by
lazy fire; warm.


5 comments:

  1. What a wonderfully peaceful scene you've painted. Who knew the Than Bauk could yield verse so soft? I really like the sense of serenity in this.

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  2. Very restful and good use of the form -- well done

    PS - I don't know if you know: you have CAPTCH word identification turn of. It is a pain in the butt -- you might consider turning it off. I had to submit this comment three times because of it.

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  3. smiles...nice little scene you capture...and peaceful for sure....nice use of the form...

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  4. Nice rhyming. :-) But,

    GIVE FRUIT

    A rhyme is good,
    is understood, if
    the food of tree.

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  5. glassware smooth- Nice ! Thanks for visiting.

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