for dVerse
Silver
Fairy beneath moon silver
Beneath soaring in flights
Moon in anticipation of
Silver flights of fancy.
Sea Lore
I walked by the seashore
Walked lifting shells pink – speaking
By shells heard ocean lore.
The pink ocean sand shifting
Seashore speaking lore; shifting secrets.
for Magpie Tale 123
Hat
Silk hat; black. Important to us.
Hat for night meetings; Secretly covered,
Black night that we walk in.
Important meetings; we vanish away. Mystery.
To secretly walk away soft like.
Us covered in mystery. Like silk.
I am impressed, you did a 4x4, 5x5 and a 6x6 square poem! Bravo! Didn't you find, after writing this, that you respected punctuation more than you ever did? I know I did!
ReplyDeleteI sure did! "Hat" wouldn't have worked without the punctuation. Thanks for stopping by.
DeleteI'm impressed too...you did several..well done and so creative.
ReplyDeleteThanks!
Deletesnap you are all over this one....i rather like the one about the hat....some really cool verse...nicely done to form...
ReplyDeletewow...you went for three even...i like them all..fav is that with the hat as well..nice
ReplyDeleteSo, not all of us struggled with this form, eh? Very, very nicely done.
ReplyDeleteGreat job here. 3 of them nonetheless. Very nicely done. Thanks
ReplyDeleteWhew, you did very well with the form ~ I like all of them ~
ReplyDeleteGreat stuff, very ambitiously tried and succeeded!
ReplyDeleteWondrous ~ I am filled with admiration!
ReplyDeleteI love them all like crazy. Seriously. Awesome. :)
ReplyDeleteImpressive!
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