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The train comes flying down the track
Screeching past my luggage stack
For there's adventure to attract
No looking back! No looking back!
Pulling out into bold sunlight
Hurtling into great delight
Directly to each shining sight
The future's bright! The future's bright!
I like the positive ending of the future's bright ~ Rhyming verses are fun to read as well ~
ReplyDeleteThe repeating lines remind me of the cadence of a train, which works well for this piece.
ReplyDeleteWonderfully filled with joy. Yes it should be like that to leave.
ReplyDeleteWhat a great poem symbolizing leaving the past behind us and looking forward to the future with enthusiasm!
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